critical reflection outline

During the peer reflection session, I received comment from Asyraf and felt that his suggestion is constructive and really helpful. He pointed out that my introduction can be strengthen and clearer, as I did not explain the relationship between social media and copyright infringement clearly. He also suggested that I should explain the problem with more detail in introduction to make whole essay clearer. I agree with him because I had chosen the problem of copyright infringement on shopping website as my topic, which is not very general. After I reread my essay, I realised that I really need to explain more in first part of essay; the link between social media and shopping website is unclear and confusing. Likewise, my tutor suggested me to define some particular nouns, such as Taobao, which is one of the biggest shopping website in China. It may be confusing if reader do not familiar with it or had no experience of online-shopping.  Problem solution essay should be general as it is presenting to everyone, I have to make sure that everyone are able to understand the specific words in my essay. Peers comments was helpful as it figured out the problem I had so I could improve on my essay.

Apart from received the comment from others, this activity also gave me a chance to read others essay and learnt how to write a better essay. After reading some of our classmates’ essay, I found that they have concise and clear introduction and good organisation, which made their essay flow and sound. Through reading and commenting others essay, I has learnt how to develop on my own essay. In conclusion, peer reflection enable us to discover our problem in writing and give us a chance to improve and learn from others.